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Post by »¢ricket¸ × on Dec 3, 2007 18:36:39 GMT -5
Name: Cricketstar Age: 31 moons Gender: She-cat Clan: RippleClan Position: Leader Personality: Cricketstar is a very fierce and loyal leader. She wants nothing, but to guide and keep her Clan safe. She is a kind and helpful cat who won't disappoint you; she always keeps her promises. She is a quick thinker and a fast learner, always making up good plans. She is a pretty good liar and actor, but defiantly not the best. She can, mostly, make cats believe what she say, if she is lying or acting. She might snap once in a while, but only when she's really annoyed or angry. Cat Description: Cricketstar is a slim and lean, but muscular, she-cat. She relies, both, on her strength and speed. She has a short, pretty, light brown tabby pelt. Her paws and chest are white. Her pelt is smooth, except her chest fur, which is ruffled; she doesn't love cleaning her pelt all the time. She has an angled face, with sharp, bright green eyes. She has small ears and paws, with a long tail. Her whiskers are short and white and her nose is a soft pink, like her pads, which hold clear, sharp, claws. History: Cricketstar was born to two loyal warriors, like herself. Flametail and Frostheart. They were very in love; having her and her sister, Dancingwind. They were raised well and were quite popular among the Clan. She was trained by her father and learned much, always having fun with him. Things were pretty good. Though, one day, Dancingwind disappeared. She had always felt out of place in RippleClan; never feeling quite part of it all. So, she left, becoming a loner, for her restless spirit, which her states. The whole family missed her dearly, but they sometimes visited her. Role-Playing Example: Night had fallen. It was a moonless night. Nothing could be seen... except darkness. A rustle in the bush told that a vole was near by. Paws were placed ever-so carefully on the ground, but with such a fast speed. The vole never knew what was coming... till the very last, hopleless, second. The brown tabby pounced, sharp, clear claws piercing the flesh of her prey. In an instant, it lay at on the ground, motionless. Suddenly, and without warning, another cat appeared out of the thick darkness. The warrior she-cat hissed in surprise, but a voice calmed her fears. "It's ok, Cricketstar, it's only me, Dancingwind." the warm voice whispered. Cricketstar sighed; hissing playfully, "Dancingwind?! You scared the fur off of me! What are you doing here?" her paw swipped over her sister's head gently. The beautiful she-cat smiled mischievously as she spoke, "Oh, nothing really. I was just wandering around and just happened to bump into you!" The leader snorted and twitched her tail, indicating for her to follow her. "So," she mewed, "tell me why you're really here..." Other Notes: Zip.
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Post by Shadefeather on Dec 3, 2007 21:13:44 GMT -5
Just add a Role Play example(sorry, they're needed in each biography), and do a quick spelling check; I noticed a typo or two. After you do that, it'll be moved.
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Post by »¢ricket¸ × on Dec 4, 2007 18:04:11 GMT -5
Ok, thanks!
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Post by Shadefeather on Dec 4, 2007 18:27:12 GMT -5
Accepted.
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